I am a student. This is a place where I will share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Good work Grace. You used adjectives and some similes to help your reader imagine the story in their own head. It was a very interesting and creative story line!
Good work Grace. You used adjectives and some similes to help your reader imagine the story in their own head. It was a very interesting and creative story line!
ReplyDeletethanks ms hazlett for the feedback and I will try to add the same detail to my next story.
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