E-Portfolio Writing Term 1

E-PORTFOLIO - Writing Term One

ACHIEVEMENT OBJECTIVES:

Structure:

L2: Organise texts, using a range of structures.

Indicators:

• Uses knowledge of word and sentence order to communicate meaning when creating text.
• Organises and sequences ideas and information with some confidence.
• Begins to use a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L3: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures

Indicators:

• Organises written ideas into paragraphs with increasing confidence.
• Uses a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L4: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

• Organise and sequences ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect;
• Uses a variety of sentences structures, beginnings, and lengths for effect.

Go through your writing and highlight examples of the following sentences.

Simple sentences - green

Compound sentences - yellow

Complex sentences - light blue

As I sat down a giant splash hit the grand up the aisle it was the airhostest she had spilt some icy water.  And all a of sudden there were penguins sliding down the aisle.  After that I was going to doze off. But the person next to me bet me to it and he snored and snored ''HE IS SO AONING''. I said.  I put my head phones on and watched a movie.  Some giraffes came down and massaged my feet ''it was painful ''I  thought ''.